Sarah, I'm glad you took my advice to start posting. I just received part 3 from you, so I'll get that back to you ASAP.
Don't worry about changing things right now, you explained to me that it needs to be a flimsy excuse, so everyone else can just wait and see.
Now that others are seeing this, you can get more than my feedback; perhaps you 'might' want to take some advice from here and change future events to answer questions asked here.
Don't feel you have to explain too much in the feedback, people are just anxious to see what happens next. They'll just have to be patient!
Desiree
