Everyone has already posted so many great comments. Just want to let you know, Carol, that I'm really enjoying this fic and that it's great to get the sudden change from sweetness-and-romance-in-Paris to we're-in-big-trouble-now!
I thought that Clark was going to find drugs in the crate when he x-rayed it. The guns....that's a nice touch. How far will Clark go to protect his secret? Will he let them be seen by whoever it is who comes to unload the pallets of guns? Or will he just whisk them out of there? Will Lois be captured?
I'm hoping for a really good scene where Clark has to use his powers in front of Lois (but nobody else) and she'll find out the Big Secret. Also, can Mindy know that Lois is here? They obviously know each other, and Mindy will have no trouble in disposing of Lois if it seems that Lois will be messing up Mindy's little scheme.
You've got me wondering now!
Please keep up the rapid posting schedule, it gives me anticipation!
Once again, great work so far.
