OMG not the first post =P Too bad I read this chapter on my phone and didn't feel like posting an FDK on its tiny "keyboard" lol
I agree with Ann, I loved the flashback and I really want to know more about Lois and Chad. (and also kinda like how you kept it LnC as a tangent lol) I also liked the subtle changes in the famous episode quotes, for example:
Originally posted by anonpip:
“Have you ever lived with someone?” Lois asked as they watched the room across the alleyway.
...
“No,” Clark admitted.
HiM Script:
LOIS
Have you ever lived with anyone? I
mean, full time. A relationship.
With a member of the opposite sex.
CLARK
No. Not full time.
I also like how Lois seems not quite as gaga over Superman, though at the same time the feelings she does have feel more grounded to me.
Finally, loved Martha and Jonathan, hehe, teasing Clarkie is always good =P
