There were so many good things about these chapters!
This made me laugh.
"Well, I finally found a couple decent authors who've actually finished a few stories. A bunch of the first ones I found were posted in really short segments by people who had no clue about sentence structure or spell check, much less how to develop a plot or finish a story. This one lady – she goes by Beth, but I have no idea if that's her real name or not – has written a couple that looked good rnd got good reviews. Another one named Bananna, Great Defender Of All That Is Daniel – whatever that means – has, too, but hers are more Tony and Ziva stories."
And I'm in awe of anyone who can write, listen to music, and ride in a car the same time! I know a lot of people these days prefer to listen to music and write at the same time, but I've never been able to. And writing/reading while riding in a car makes me car sick. So the idea of doing all at the same time!
I'm surprised that Lana agreed to go with them, although I will admit it's a good plot devise.
I'm also surprised that Clark is thinking about telling Lois about himself. (although I'm glad he is) I know his parents told him he would have to unless he wants to lose their support. And unless he wants to be spiteful or lie to his parents more than he already has, he'll have to. But I just got the impression he wouldn't consider that for a long time.
