Delightful part. I like how your Lois handled the whole thing.
If your Lois makes the same intuitive leaps as canon Lois I'd bet on her being the one to figure out Kryptonite.
So what evil bad thing is Lana going to do thus destroying herself in Clark's eyes so he can move on?
They have the globe, wonderful. They also have the ship, so perhaps B39 is not lurking in the shadows.