Quick note:
Thanks all
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Framework - yes, it should - thought I edited it from the 'Firefox fills in the blanks for you' old version.
Michael - the story will be uploaded twice - once on it's own as a stand alone story and as part of OTOH with Lois' thoughts in it. It was originally meant to be the first couple chapters of a stand alone story that then jumped to a practically canon L/C getting ready to have their first baby or something, but it fit so well here...
Back later...
Carol
