Several random points.
First of all I believe they're redeemable because of the fact that I have a feeling 1) this story isn't anywhere near the end and 2) there's a sequel. Sounds like there's a lot of parts left for something to happen! Second reason why I think they're redeemable is based off your previous story, Learning to Love. I just couldn't see L&C making up for a long time, but all it took was one really beautifully written part at the end to pull it all together. So I know you can do it!
He got up with him in the middle of the night and I could hear him talking quietly, telling him bedtime stories or something of that nature and only coming to get me if and when it became apparent that he really wanted to eat.
This brings up SUCH a cute image of Clark telling Chris stories and talking to him! I needed that. I needed to believe that he's still a good albeit misguided guy. He's still being a moron about Lois, but I love him hanging out with the little guy and telling him stories.
Random third, Lois' PPD explains a lot; if she and Clark ever start talking, I hope she can tell him about it. And even though Clark is being a moron about Lana, I can understand the part about losing a best friend. They could both have that support if they would just start talking to each other again, but something has to break the ice...we'll just have to RAFO to see what it finally is.
JD
