Cool parts.. loved the dancing.
Nice how Lois is succeeding somewhat to stave off the depression "she's decided not to let thought of Lana dampen her contentment"... although how long will Lana remain in the background?
Your story is so full of two steps fwd one step bwd... simply wow! Like L&C are having a grand time at the Kerths, and then Lois blurts out "after the divorce, Clark and Lana"... why is Clark so stuck? I mean why is he expecting Lana to forgive him or wait... he does have doubts whether Lana will take him back or not.. right?
I think he just doesn't want to think too clearly about what he's done to Lana and whether Lana will take him back 4 yrs down the line ... he's taking his purgatory one day at a time not thinking too much about the future, yet dreaming & hoping about that very future with Lana.. he frustrates me so much
But now... what will Martha tell him on the phone? Something happened to Jonathan (you brought his back problem in this part.. hmm) or maybe Grannie Kent?
Looking fwd to more.
