Carol, that was an amazing twist on the shuttle launch. Nothing at all like the Pilot /clap/
The Clark/Lana talk was great.
And Clark got his moment. And you're still evil. Of course, Lois isn't going to die. Otherwise, Clark would have to go back in time and safe her.
Lois' thoughts over her predicament where great and now I'm waiting and hoping you will have time tomorrow morning after all. Waiting 36 hours for the next part is just too brutal a torture.
/shivers/ Michael
PS: I won't comment on the previews. They're obviously meant to increase the angst and make us think Lois is in danger of dying. And I mean, real danger as opposed to movie-danger. She probably just got grazed over the head and knocked out or has a bullet in her shoulder or something and needs surgery. If that much. Probably not, because Clark wouldn't leave her side to go back to write the story unless Lois told him so before getting stitches or her arm fixed.
PPS: Did I mention you're evil?
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