Great job, Karen! Thanks for sharing it with us.
I loved the opening scene--it was a great twist that Lois was so tied up in ranting at Trask that she completely forgot about Clark's secret for a moment.
Having her figure it out so early takes a lot of the angst out of the revelation since she has no reason to think that he *should* have told her and she doesn't feel stupid for not figuring it out sooner.
I hope you'll keep writing for us as time allows.
- Happy