Wow, I had totally and heartbreakingly given up on this story being completed, yaaayyy!!! So glad you're back Rac. Can't believe you've been back for months and I've only just now discovered it.
Anyway...I think we all knew there was going to be a long and difficult road ahead for Clark and Lois. I am somewhat frustrated with Clark's lunkheadedness and self blame at this point, but it's so excruciatingly good!
I have always requested more Jon scenes, so I love that you include some relief in the story and some progress with the Clark/Jon relationship. Maybe a domestic Lois/Clark/Jon scene...please?
Loving Dr Friskin, hoping she'll become more tough with Clark. Actually, same with Lois, I know she is trying to be the supportive wife and loving Clark through the experience and also that she has grown more patient and less feisty over the years. But she's still Lois Lane! I can't help thinking that she is going to give Clark an ultimatum and hoping that it will result in something positive rather than a further separation... hmm, anyway lots to think about.
Soooooo glad you're back Rac! Please post again soon...
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