I know I'm *really* behind on all my reading, but I've been wanting to catch up with this story since it first appeared.
Anyway, over two nights, I've got to Part 9 and wanted to tell you that I'm reading (albeit belatedly) and really enjoying it.
There were some LOL bits - too many in 9 parts to quote, but I particularly loved your take on the 'don't fall for me,' line. Wonderful!
Having Lana as a friend and support is a change that works really well. Marrying her off is a masterstroke - now she can't possibly be competition for Lois.
Both Lois and Clark/Superman/Caleb are in character, yet you've managed to draw out other little nuances that deepen them as characters.
I will definitely keep reading, but I quite enjoy taking my time as it gives me a chance to think about the story between parts.
Corrina.
