Corrina!
I'm so glad you're along for the ride. It's good to hear that the story works in large chunks. Since I write and post it in parts, I sometimes worry that the parts will be disjointed. We want it to meld together into a coherent whole as well as having each part be enjoyable on its own.
I have a lot of respect (which I try not to let devolve into envy

) for your writing talent, so I'll be looking for your feedback.
