My wrist is bothering me from too much leaf blowing, so I'll make this short.
She knew she had the figure to pull it off, but would Caleb be interested or shocked? With a decisive nod, she decided that a man who regularly appeared in public wearing briefs on the outside of his tights had no cause for complaint.
Also, a couple of typos you'll want to correct before archiving:
he pulled her forward to leaned in to kiss her cheek.
'leaned' should be 'lean'
and
and I get the feeling the girls usually one.
'one' should be 'won'.
A fun part. I'd comment on a lot more if my wrist were up to it. As is, all I'll say is I wonder whether Lois will see "Aunt Opal" as a hint to who Superman really is. "Opal" isn't a common name, and *Clark* really does have an Aunt Opal.
Looking forward to the next part.
Joy,
Lynn
