Thanks Chelo and John for bumping up this old story.
Earlier this year, I dusted off my Treasure Chest file and edited it in preparation for the Archive. During the last few chapters, I got the sense it wasn't quite right and put it back on the shelf, planning one final re-read before submission. I haven't actually got to that re-read yet, but what I do have is smoother and more polished than what is on the boards.
If you wish to continue reading and you'd like to take advantage of the improved version, email me at hawka@iinet.net.au and I'll send you the file.
Corrina.
