Seme Thanks, Seme. So glad you're enjoying this, despite it being a little rugged in places.

Sarah Definitely looking up, Sarah. Thanks.

Vicki

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This brings such a clear picture of Clark to my mind's eye, and I do believe if I were Lois, he wouldn't have stood a chance.
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Thanks, Vicki.

JD

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Lois Lane is going to be Clark Kent.
I thought that could be fun.

Thanks, Shadow.

Kathy I think we're past the lunkheadedness. Thanks for your comments, Kathy.

Ann Both Lois and Clark show maturity and wisdom. Both Lois and Clark show immaturity. I guess it all depends on what you choose to concentrate on.

Thanks, Ann.

Evelyn

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Frankly, I don't understand why it doesn't occur to her that she should explain why she started crying after they had just made love,
This will come out later, but Lois doesn't know for sure that Clark saw her tears because she was asleep. Does she mention it and risk hurting him unnecessarily? Or does she just hope he didn't realise she was crying?

I, too, find it very easy to lose perspective, particularly when emotions are involved.

Thanks, Evelyn.

Flowerpot Some of what you mention we will get to ... some we won't. Thanks for your FDK.

DW Glad you like Viv. Thanks.

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hope you have the next scenes in the kitchen also and how that will unfold.
The entire next chapter is the pizza party. I was so smile when I read this comment, knowing what was coming.

Michael

No, *this* Beau is not *that* Beau. laugh

Thanks for all your wonderful FDK, Michael.

Terry So nice to get another male's perspective, Terry.

Thanks for your comments. I'm glad it all seems believable to you.


Corrina.