Well, I hate to speculate as to low feedback. However, many of us have been there. I can only speculate but when I post something that gets unusually low feedback, I tend to think it means I've failed to connect with my audience. Either my story is uninteresting or it is flawed in a way that fails to generate very many positive responses.
I like your idea here. I really do. I think there is a lot of potential in the idea of mixing these S1 and S2 elements. However, I am struggling with Lois's behavior in light of Lex's obvious evil.
Good grief, in part 2 he threatened both Clark and Superman. For me, the fact that she first pushed Clark away and then allowed Lex to DECLARE that they are engaged when she'd never said yes to his proposal is really stretching things. Where is Lois's backbone?
In the canon version of her engagement to Lex, she never knew what he was. In this story, with her much clearer picture of both Lex and Clark, I have to say that I find her actions harder to accept.
Well, I hope this doesn't offend too much. I don't like to be negative, but I am trying to help with what may not be working in your story. Since you asked about feedback I hope it means that you are going to be more receptive to -- more critical comments.
Bob
