Thanks for responding, guys!
I knew I was risking a bit making Lex a bit more openly threatening... But I guess I always struggled with why she would marry him at all... To me it made more sense if she had been forced. And I thought that using Lois' abrupt ending of the date from 'Lucky Leon' would be better played if it was more than because of her relationship insecurities, which is why I had Lex threaten her. Maybe I wrote myself into a corner with that?
Anyway, please stick with me. I'm on a dangerous track with this story, I think, but there are some turns that I hope you like!
Reach for the moon, for even if you fail, you'll still land among the stars... and who knows? Maybe you'll meet Superman along the way.
