hahaha, I like how Trask was killed by a simple incident such as getting struck by a bus.

Your writing shows very well what is going on. My emotions are hooked and involved, and I am enjoying the setup of the story.

I'm really looking forward to her first physical encounter with him. Based on your teaser, I'm going to guess that her first method to that will be to show him humanity by allowing a sponge bath. Will he be feral with her? Aggressive, because that is the treatment he's received for the past 7 years?

Whatever emotional trauma she's been through, it sounds like that will be the key to open up her sensitivity to caring about her assignment.

I can't wait to read more! smile1


Reality is merely an illusion, albeit a very persistent one. -- Albert Einstein