mozartmaid Is it because of all he has been through why he appears so old?
Yes. Or perhaps that is what Lois was expecting.
Elizabeth the first time Lois steps into his cell
No comment ... just musing over what you said ...
Kyla It's definitely a series of stories. I won't get this worked out in eight parts. I'm currently writing part 3 of the second story.
LadyMoira hahaha, I like how Trask was killed by a simple incident such as getting struck by a bus.
Me, too. I didn't need him anymore. I couldn't write this because I wasn't in Trask's POV, but to me it seems fitting that he was probably planning something horrible to do to Clark instead of concentrating ... then ... squish! Gone.
Tank but watching the process is what this story is going to be all about
Yep. I don't think this is a torturefic. If anything, it's an after-the-torture-fic.
DW Oh, and I'm soooo happy that Lois is the consummate agent (but then again, who else could it have been?)
True. If it's going to be a Lois and Clark story, Lois had to be in there somewhere.
Vicki Once a week is just plain too long to wait between chapters,
My posting schedule is twice a week.
However, I love your enthusiasm!
Re the surgery - I can't know what you're thinking, but I don't think it will be as bad as some of your ideas. When I wrote it (knowing what I was refering to), I didn't even realise the potential for really awful possibilities.
bellarase 'Meeting' ... uhm. I can say it won't be a 'shake-hands-and-mutter-pleased-to-meet-you type meeting!
Michael I loved all the
, Michael. The start of a story should have questions. Hopefully, by the end, there will be answers!
Thanks for the wonderful FDK, everyone. I need to keep a buffer - not only for my peace of mind, but I'm still going back and adjusting bits early in the story - but I'll post as quickly as possible.
Corrina.
