Hi Sue. Thanks for the feedback on the feedback.
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If and when Lois learns that Clark is Superman, she's going to be able to piece together the fact that he knows which side of the bed she sleeps on and all that that entails. You're right, it could be read as creepy. I'll work on it.
I didn't read it as creepy, but cute. That's because Lois has a yearning for the S-man. So don't weaken it, but maybe express Lois' opinion.
Yes, Framework4 gave us something to think on. If it's a new drug, I'd vote for Star Labs to break the code. If it was standard roofies, any crime lab could handle it. Not all police labs are CSI level.
More soon. Also as to the four year old story, hop to it gal! (after this one, that is.) We're waiting!
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