Perfect... absolutely perfect! You are one very talented writer! I think I was as excited as Lois when I started reading the chapter!
@EvelynC... 'gawping' is like openly staring/gaping and if you use it in everyday language like we do here in NZ (and obviously in Aussie) then it was just the perfect word for the sentence. I'd have been gawping too!
Thank you Corrina, now looking forward to what comes next.
Cheers
Elizabeth
