Oh, where to start? I think this is one of the best parts of them all. There were quite a few lines I liked, so many that people would think I'd just quoted the whole part.
I love how strong--and wise--Lois is being while Clark is adjusting. It's very telling that after only a handful of days, she already knows enough about Clark to know that if he can survive seven years of imprisonment and torture, he can get through this time...even if he doesn't think he can.
Clark is trying very hard, which I'm delighted to see. He has an inner strength that you've captured so well, his inner character given a greater chance to shine through despite this incredibly dark situation.
The ending made me laugh out loud--until I read the little preview. It's so poignant seeing his imminent expectation to be condemned by everyone he meets, and heartbreaking how he thinks he deserves to be considered less than human.
I can't wait for the rest of the story--thanks a lot!
