Well, Menzies is definitely distracted ... but Moyne is all too focused on his revenge.
Though I'm not sure how he's going to both find out about Lois and not give away the fact that he's in Metropolis. Does he not remember that he was supposed to check in for information on his assignment? Or does he just not care?
But one thing I do know -- Moyne might be an agent, but so is Lois, and since she knew she was going to be on the run, I'm sure she took steps to cover her tracks. She was expecting Scardino and Menzies to chase after her; would Moyne be any better at it than they would? I hope not.
As for L&C, I liked how his poem made its return (beautiful) and how we got to learn a little more about our heroes. Clark was very sweet, wanting to take Lois out to eat.
More, please! I'm still delighted every time I stalk ... er, visit the boards to find a new chapter.
Kathy
