OH I like the new lead in. Again a lot has taken place in this part of the story. We know now what M and M are thinking. We see hope seeping through Clark's thoughts. Lois is getting through to him I think. How sad for him to pass his home and not be able to stop there. Hopefully that will change quickly. Great job! I will look forward to more soon! Laura
Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”
Caroline's "Stardust"
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