There was so much I absolutely loved in this part. For the first part, I admit I had a funny feeling in my stomach, feeling so much for Clark and what he was going through, pulled in by the wonderful descriptiveness of your writing. But then, as it continued, I felt as Lois did when she exclaimed that it was over and they were free. While I'm not sure that's necessarily true, I certainly appreciate these few moments.
Clark's insight into himself was amazing for someone who has spent seven years in a prison. That point was really emphasized when Lois thought of how much of a dream this all must feel, comparing it to her own escape from hell.
The homecoming was so beautifully done, drawn and realized just as if we were there with Clark, each detail bringing us a bit closer, each memory painting the picture a little fuller. And the emotions rioting inside Clark, the thoughts running through his head...it was all so...well, I already used the word beautiful, so I'll settle for amazing this time.
And I like how he chose to have Lois stay in his room so that he could keep that feeling of connection with her. It was sweet, and just the sort of little, understanding, hopeful gesture that Clark--of any universe, story, or show--would make.
One of my favorite parts was when Lois realized that he might never recover, but that she loved him anyway and would be there for him no matter what. The way she sees him is just so perfect and fitting, and I, too, wish he could see himself the way she does, but if he did, he wouldn't be Clark.
I also liked how she gets him to use his powers to help them, and how skillfully he was applying his sight. It's cool to see Clark actually using his powers.
Well, I had more parts I really liked--the whole part actually--but I'll try not to mention them all. It's getting better every time, I think. I can't wait for more.
