Wow .. that was really awesome!
I am glad that Menzies "saw the light" and decided that there would be no special treatment for Moyne and that it will/might save his marriage. So sad about Phoebe though
For a moment there I thought that perhaps Menzies can put a bullet between Moyne's eye once he is escorted back to Metropolis.
I agree with Kathy that it will be good for Clark to take care of Lois for a while and that might even convince him that he can be enough for her and what she, not only wants, but needs.
Also, Lois has been through a lot - with the whole Linda episode, seeing the injustices done to Clark, and Moyne attacking her twice - that I am glad you didn't gloss over it. Lois needs to deal with those emotions in herself - rage, mostly I think - and Clark will be able to help her once she lets him in.
I also liked how Lois was cold to Clark in this and the previous part - she is a very competent agent and at that stage with Moyne attacking her, she needed to "revert back" into an almost "cool, unemotional, rational" agent thinking. (EDT: but now she is in a bad place).
Looking very much forward to the next part!
