Wow -- well done! I agree with Kathy that now that Clark will have to take care of Lois for a while, it may help put their relationship on even footing.
You paint your characters so well! You make us interested in, fear, sympathize with, and worry about secondary characters, which shows real skill as a writer!
I too hope the next part is posted soon! I hope LnC are able to connect a bit in the next chapters as Lois tries to work through what happened to her and what happened in the past with Linda.
Reach for the moon, for even if you fail, you'll still land among the stars... and who knows? Maybe you'll meet Superman along the way.
