Love the tie in to Lois being electrocuted.

You had some fine lines such as:

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Oh, gee, her beeper rang and she had to run off without notice, with a lame excuse or without explanation at all? I wonder what that’s like?”
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That maybe you and Lucy had taken in the revival of My Fair Lady with Arnold Schwarzenegger and Michelle Kwan.”
What an image!

Love the idea of pregnancy giving Lois some super powers.

Joan