Ooh, that was quite an expected not-so-little story. I did start to worry about the Zelig stone when the animals showed up. But the death-by-karma was brilliantly clever set up. Never saw it coming, just wondered why you'd put it in there, expect to add depth.
Of course, now you've got to explain 'Target, Jimmy Olsen', too. After all, he's in a brand new body, one that wasn't prepped by the government to be an assassin.
Michael
