The sarcasm was dripping in this feedback, Darth Michael--I loved it (sarcasm might be the lowest form of wit, but it's a lot of fun)!
Oh, and by the way, is your day job a defense attorney for Luthor and his friends?
The double-meanings during the conversations are the hardest (and one of the funnest) things about this story. In fact, I'm having to go over every bit of dialogue a hundred times to make sure every word is placed right. I'll have to wait till the end of the story to see if I succeeded or not.
LOVED the comment about Che Lex! It was so funny I had to call my Mom in to read it--thanks for that!
Lois? Drive Clark away? There's a thought.
Thanks!
