You started posting! clap I see that you have improved the story adding still more details. Your descriptions are always so rich that I can see the story you're telling as if I was watching it. cool

I agree about the first paragraph - it's so graphic that I can feel the rain. wink

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"My wife's love is what unites Krypton and Earth in my heart. Without it, without her, I truly would be in hell."

~ Superman: Man of Tomorrow #15