Interesting! I, for one, have always been fascinated by the character of Lex Luthor

in and beyond the sense of just being a villain- and as such I really like how you're going into his character more in depth in this story!

You're writing style is really descriptive and strong with regards to imagery. I'm curious as to just who this Aykira is- and more importantly, who does she truly love

(me seeing potentials for various love triangles and/or future emotional havoc...)
Keep up the good work, I'll keep following!
