Yay! More!
Pat said:
Regardless of how much trouble she was in, the brain never stopped for a second. She would have never figured it out if she had been a mere mortal like the rest of us. That's why I have Clark pointing out that he fell in love with her because she was Lois. She has an extra gear of determination (I think). A sequel? Um... next question?
Joy – You went back and reread the darn thing? Golly! Here's an extra hug for all that effort. Thanks for sticking with me all the way through (and then some).
Phyrry – Thanks! It thrills me to have lured someone out of lurkerdom to comment.
That "awkward stage" is my absolute favorite. There are so many ways she can find out/he can tell her.
Kristen – And I was so excited to see you leave feedback! You also get extra points for reading the whole darn thing again. Thank you so much for your kind words on characterization and dialogue.
I'm betting those episodes you cringed at were in the third or fourth season. After Deborah Joy Levine left, the show (to me) went downhill fast. I base my characterizations on her version of the characters. Her vision of L/C is what made me fall in love with the show to begin with.
Joan – Thanks! It really does mean so much to me to see the same people coming back on each part of the story. I'm glad you liked the story.
Steph! – As always, I just want to grope you. <g> It's not canon that Clark knew who she was before coming to the Planet, but it makes sense to me that he did. It's a world-class newspaper, she's his age and she's already won two major journalism awards.
His rules are never explicitly stated, but he had to have had some (especially since we see him more than once freaking about crossing lines/causing harm).
Ken – Thanks! WAFF makes the world go 'round.
Jen! – What, no update on how many times you moved while I delayed for months in posting the story?!? :p I'll join you in the basking (only mine is because it's finally freakin' finished and I can cross it off my conscience).
Virginia said:
Yes, Lois, for weeks now I haven't been trying to tell you I'm Superman, but that I'm a virgin. That first one isn't that important. That is the gift that keeps on giving. Thanks (again!), Michael!
Yay! You might be relieved to know that there are some short (or shorter) stories on the archive.
Thanks again to everyone whose left feedback. It means a lot to me to have kept you all entertained. Especially when I left you all hanging for months. I apologize fervently for that and promise to try never to do it in the future. Hugs for everyone!
