Oh Sue!
What a great story! I have missed your writing. With your flowing style, it is so easy to see Lois as she plans how to get out of that train car. Her suborn persistence, even when she realizes she is going the wrong direction, is classic. And Clark's thought process is heart wrenching as he spirals into depression as the hours tick by with no sign of Lois.
I also enjoy how you have Lois remembering her times with Clark where we see him –so- wanting to tell Lois the truth but being afraid. So he leaves all of these clues that Lois finally puts together. Fun Stuff!
Now, you hinted that you were willing to take our two heroes to the N-side. You write such beautiful interaction between Lois and Clark. If this current crew of “Sue Fans” has not read your writing before or your Nfic, run, don’t walk, to the achieves on the G or the Nfic side and read any of Sue’s stories. They are just SUPER!
I’ll be watching on the N-side.
Write on Sue!
Anne
