And shouldn't he just try to look at her?
Well, I'm sure he would if he wasn't blind.
That was one of the constant challenges in writing this story - having to remember that Clark's blind. So when telling something from Clark's point of view, I have to remember to say 'Clark heard Lois take seat' - instead of saying 'Lois took a seat.' At one point, I actually had their eyes meeting across a room. When I went back and reread it, I realized... oops. That doesn't work. So... how do I establish that they make a connection when I can't have their eyes meet? It made writing... fun
Umm... Dad. Remember how Father Chestwick told us about getting blind when I was in junior high? I just figured out it works the other way 'round, too.
They didn't really tell boys that did they? I thought that was just one of those weird things that everyone said they said rather than what anyone actually said. Boy, if that were true, the entire human race would be blind. Wonder if anyone ever realized that.
Glad you're enjoying it Mouserocks and Laurach.
Anyway, just getting the next part ready for posting now. It should be up at midnight.
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