Hi anonpip,
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not exactly WAFFY, I don’t think.
I beg to differ there. The story provoked numerous emotions in me, and WAFF was definitely among them.

I liked how you reversed the typical Lois and Clark dialogue -- having Clark angry with himself and having Lois explain to him all the reasons why he shouldn't have told her earlier.

The only suggestion for improvement I would have would be a correction of the typo in the following:
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It’s a responsibility you can’t take likely, Clark.
Thanks for a terrific story.

Joy,
Lynn