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Originally posted by John Lambert:
Well, so far in my re-read I have to say things flow.
smile1 Phew. Good to hear.

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I also have to admit I totally forgot that Lois saw Superman's ship in the B39 warehouse, and did not figure out that it worked as his ship because he had been smaller then.
That would be quite a big assumption.

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I did come across a typo in this section that just grated....

I am pretty sure that should be "He had no idea what she was talking about."
Thanks. Fixed. wave

VirginiaR.
"On the long road, take small steps." -- Jor-el, "The Foundling"
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