Laura Although the story seems to be about Clark and his difficulties, I think Lois's determination to save him is the main point. I'm glad you like it.
Iolanthe At this stage, Lois has learnt that Superman can redeem the most hopeless of situations. I've turned the tables.
Kate Good point about Lois. Don't forget that all the forensic team were male, so it was more likely they would miss the clues from fashion and types of makeup etc.
Happy Believe me, I'm really frustrated by the slowness of posting. I keep hoping for a block of two or three hours to make some progress, and something keeps getting in the way.
Thanks for the comments. I worked on Part 9 tonight. It's getting pretty big, so maybe I'll have to split it. Maybe there will be 16 parts. I'll see how it reads tomorrow.
Corrina.
