Kate It was never my intention to belittle the police, but obviously, if they had done the job properly, Lois wouldn't have needed to step in and I wouldn't have had a story. I tried to give the police reasons for believing they were dealing with an open and shut case.

Michael

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Ooooh! Moping Clark™!
laugh

Who owns *that* trademark? And do they mind how often we use it?

I'm glad you liked the scene where Superman was trying to tell Perry that Lois could be in danger. That scene was one that held up my posting schedule!

DC

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Eek! Just talk to her, big guy.
He can't go to her - he can't face her telling Clark/Superman she thinks Clark killed Mayson.

laugh about all your answers to my questions.

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Really? Because you could have fooled me there, Bill.
Henderson and Wolfe have a witness saying Clark walked into the apartment, Mayson walked in, Mayson was shot, Clark ran out. On the surface, that's compelling ... which of course, opened the way for *someone* to dig a little deeper. wink

Vicki

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Something about this makes me think Perry *doesn't* understand. Or maybe I misunderstood. Does Perry think Superman is telling him that *Clark* is a threat to Lois?
Yes. It will become clearer in a later part.

Thanks everyone for the FDK! It always makes my day to read your comments about my story.

Corrina.