Beautifully written. The way you twist a phrase and make the reader turn with you. I haven't read any of the old TOGOM, and I'll have to remedy that fact. I am familiar with the Tank funny vignette, but haven't read many of the deep dramas with meaning and simple beauty (and I am sorry I keep coming up with that one word but it's the one that sticks with me) that tugs at my heart as this one does.
I'm so glad that Lois didn't continue her exisitance with Peter in L.A. Thank you for such a beautiful (darn, there's that word again) romance. You had me to the point of tears.
Feel free to de-lurk any time you like to bring us another gem like this.
