MouseRocks: Oh, dear, our little Mouseling is growing up. <<wipes away a tear>> no longer able to ride rides without getting sick.
Great chapter! So sweet! I loved that you took this from Clark's perspective the whole time and that he called her firecracker...
I'm glad that it worked.
Clark wanted his POV shown, so he didn't look SO much like a doormat, which is hard to do when one's soul mate is holding on to one's leash.
and that she kept asking him to kiss her... and that they kept coming so close to kissing... and that they kissed!
I think I would have gotten hate mail without it.
<<squeal>> and that you had this be how Clark discovers (semi-) that he could fly!!
Dumbo's feather. It works every time.
Please give me the epilogue soon! Please? Gimme, gimme, gimme... I need... I *need*!!
Ken: I couldn't remember if Clark's fall into the quarry was canon or fandon (I've seen it referenced in fanfiction often enough), so I thought I'd give him another first time that was dreamlike enough that he doesn't know for sure what exactly happened.
