I'm loving this so far, Wendy, and look forward to more. Sorry not to have more time to leave comments here or for other fantastic story(part)s I've read lately. But this is quite unique and I love it.
Just one thing I'm wondering about. As Lois is so thin... Clark will remember to give her something to eat, right? /me imagines Lois going into a difficult conversation with Clark without getting food first... Clark may have a very hard time with her! Not that I suspect him to have an easy time telling her anyway, it's still a WendyFic.
Saskia
