Originally posted by Terry Leatherwood:
The tempo of the story will have to pick up soon, because there must be a resolution of the Lana/Tempus situation and of the Lois-hiding situation, but right now both the readers and the characters need to move slowly in order to experience all the wonder of trust slowly regained and the seeds of love being planted and nurtured. My only real complaint is that there are too many hours between postings. How's about you step on the gas pedal a little more? I doubt your readers would complain.
What is this about the tempo of the story picking up. I figured it would be a 100+ part epic. No need for it to move faster.
