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The tempo of the story will have to pick up soon, because there must be a resolution of the Lana/Tempus situation and of the Lois-hiding situation, but right now both the readers and the characters need to move slowly in order to experience all the wonder of trust slowly regained and the seeds of love being planted and nurtured. My only real complaint is that there are too many hours between postings.
Sorry, Terry, I'm going to have to disagree with you on this first point. The pace seems just perfect for the slow healing process of the grief that Clark has suffered both at the hands of Tempus and that of Lana (especially Lana). It fits into the slow pace and peacefullness of the Bangala lifestyle. A fast-moving story set here, would feel out of place indeed. (I also agree with John that I wouldn't mind another 100+ part story from Female Hawk... [Linked Image]) On Terry's second point, yes, [Linked Image] GET TO WRITING! Post more often! <<cough, cough>> I mean... grovel Please!

VirginiaR.
"On the long road, take small steps." -- Jor-el, "The Foundling"
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"clearly there is a lack of understanding between those two... he speaks Lunkheadanian and she Stubbornanian" -- chelo.