for Lois for making major decisions regarding the kids without Clark. If he wasn't going to act like one of the family, he loses voting rights. It looks like Clark needed Lois to find his Utopia after all.
Love Jonathan speaking softly and hitting Clark upside the head with a club of reality. He needed it.
I'm a bit surprised that Lois chose Paris over Maine (maybe Clark doesn't realize the time of year and it's actually COLD in Maine at this point and time). I'd would think she'd rather go somewhere that felt more like home after being away for so long. Of course, Paris is a big city and Lois is from Metropolis, so maybe THAT would feel more like home. Or maybe it was something as simple as Lois really wanted French pastries. Yep, that must have been it. The chocolate is better in France than in Maine (sorry, Maine).
I love the added lines and the new Lois scene shows Clark's gotten the message that being a hero starts at home. The new stuff makes it more optimistic than the first draft; that Clark realizes that he's just as important as Superman (if not more so to his own family).
Great job.
