Very fun! I enjoyed how you integrated Griffin trying to shove her in the blender and Lois saying 'We don't serve blended drinks here!' with Clark/Superman coming to save her in the dream. It was a very realistic-sounding dream (realistic *as* a dream, that is!).
I really liked that you ended with the revelation (the look on Lois's face must have been priceless

). Although, having read 'While You Slept,' I just have to say it's amazing that Lois didn't immediately wake him up to make him explain.
I'm sure glad he actually told her this time, though…