“You take the keys” Lois said as she and Clark were heading back to the “Daily Planet”
This says it all. Lois giving up her car keys? Someone's about to die. Or they just ate take-out from Ralph's Pagoda. Oh, wait, that's the same thing.
She must be really shaken up. Usually she wants to drive when she's mad. Hmmmm. I wonder if she's ever played Pedestrian Pinball (just to freak Clark out).
“Well, we haven’t kissed for over an hour, at least not really kissed” Lois said.
So Clark took Lois in his arms and really kissed her. Then they went up to the newsroom to deal with the problems of the day.
Awwwwww. One of the perks of working with your sweetie... er... honey.
A Brutal Youth story. You don't get many of those around much (unless they're just concentrating on those first few minutes). Nice little re-write!
