Hi Erica
You've certainly come to the right place! We love fanfic here, and you have an avid audience waiting to see what you've written.
First things first: sounds like you want a beta-reader. You've asked in your post, and perhaps someone will offer as a result; if not, then post another topic with 'BR wanted' in the title. I assume that you've already run a spell-checker over the story?
When you're ready to post, you can post in instalments in the fanfic folder here first. And to submit it to the Fanfic Archive, go to
www.lcfanfic.com and read the story submission FAQ, which you'll find
here . If you have any questions after you read that, then contact the Archive Editor-in-Chief, LabRat, on labrat@lcfanfic.com.
Welcome, and happy writing!
Wendy