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OK, you really left us hanging. Does Lois actually get to meet the son that she's currently prego with??? Seems like that would be a time anomaly, doesn't it??? And how will Clark feel, seeing Lois and Lori simultaneously??
WEIRD that's how. The woman you loved for a lifetime, with the reincarnation of that woman, both preggers!!!
YIKES. ONly 1 more installment??
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
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yeah, what Chris said <g>
Yay! Lori got a message through and Clark figured it out.
Ooh! Clark in a room with Lois *and* Lori (both preggers!). Lois in a room with her son *and* grandson.
Umm... only one more part? <whine> I'll miss it when it's gone <sniffle>
But post it soon anyway <g>
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Nan! Post the last part now!!!! Please?!?
What a place to leave us hanging!
More, soon, please?
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Whoa, you are sooo mean leaving us there!!  I am all sniffly thinking about Clark coming face to face with Lois after he's mourned her....waaaaaaaaaa  Come back and let's have the finale!! ~Liz
Lois: Can I go?
Clark: No.
Lois: Oh come on, Clark, why do we go through this? We both know I’m going to go.
Clark: Then why do you ask?
Lois: I’m trying to be nice.
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 Cliffhanger woman. Where's the next part? Janine
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Only one more bit? oh no!  Nan, I've been hooked, as always, by your writing in this one!
In this life of froth and bubble,
Two things stand like stone.
Kindness in another's trouble,
Courage in your own.
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'Preggers'? Sheesh, I thought that expression went out in the 60's. Guess I'm completely out of the slang loop.
If Clark is one of the ones in the time machine, he's in for a whale of a shock, seeing Lois so young and so vibrant and so 'preggers' after she's been dead for so long. I almost hope he's there, just so you can write that scene.
And what about Lori? Even though she's Lois's spiritual descendant, it's going to be tough seeing her husband look at another woman the way he looks at her, especially knowing that the baby Lois is carrying is Clark's. I think you've been saving up all the angst until the last post and it's going to overflow with it. Your readers are going to run out of emoticons in the last feedback segment!
By the way, I like how you involved Bernie in Tempus's capture. It's good to know he can whack people over the head with the best of them.
This is an interesting story. There's no way I could ever write something like this, so I'm glad you're doing it. Keep up the great work!
Life isn't a support system for writing. It's the other way around.
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And how is Clark going to react when he sees his parents too!! Jose 
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Originally posted by daneel: And how is Clark going to react when he sees his parents too!!
Jose I thought about that too. That would be as hard as Lois, I would think. James PS, I love Krypotical. I think that should be the new buzz word...
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Ditto to what everyone else is saying. I'm looking forward to the next part. But Umm... only one more part? <whine> I'll miss it when it's gone <sniffle> Not to worry. I have faith in Nan to continue the Home series and have Lori give birth to that baby. I wonder what adventure she'll get in to before she cuts the cord? :p gerry
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Another great part, Nan! Wow, I'm really looking for the next part! I mean, Clark, Lois, Lori, Martha, Jonathan, CJ, John and who alse, all in one room... How are you going to solve the dialogues between so many characters, and with so much emotion?! Not an easy problem, but I know you're going to do it masterfully! simona 
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